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Wednesday, June 25, 2014

There is a calm in writing that is only felt once you are done with it.
And, like I said this calm comes over for a brief moment right after you've finished a piece.

Before that, the turmoil of legitimacy and originality eat your insides out. It is this very turmoil that has dissuaded me from being prolific with my posts and to be honest I'm not sure whether that will change any time soon.

However, I came across a wonderful twitter friend @prats_39, who so kindly introduced me to a concept called the 55 word project.

The 55 word project, to put it simply is to write a work of fiction, excluding the title, within the bounds of 55 words and a given theme. Now, the theme can be given in one word or a sentence and it is not necessary to use that word or the sentence but it is necessary to carry the essence of that theme.

I do not wish to deconstruct my process, and, all I will admit to is taking way too long (yes, due to my laziness and fear of god knows what when it comes to writing), but, I managed to write ten of these.

So, here it is my 55 word project.

love ~


                                    ON THE SHOULDERS OF LOVE

She would always climb up the stairs to their house with him hanging on her shoulders.
He would tell her if they fall he wouldn’t have the legs to hold ‘em together.
She’d brush it off with her soft embracing laughter and say, “So what? The way your arms hold me, they’ll never give away”.   

just when I was leaving ~


                                               MOCKING BIRDS

Just when I was leaving, two little mockingbirds flew in through my window. What seemed like a flighty wrestling match was in fact more than that.

A feather here, a feather there, it took no time to understand that this was a torrid love affair.


Just when I was leaving my once spotless humble room!

that tender kiss ~

                                        OPEN YOUR EYES PRINCESS

The forest keeps whispering a slumbering secret, her pale gown merged into the roots of the fabled trees.

Her seven friends sitting somber, not a word could be heard from the green sleepy hollows. Suddenly a trotting thump got bolder, and he came closer to her supple lips.

Awake she was, with that tender kiss.

weighing machine ~

                                            The Heavy Burden

It flew out of his house onto the streets- The Weighing Machine.

He came out to the window staring down at the remains, why couldn’t he reign in his obsession, he asked himself.

If only it could be used for weighing the goodness in his heart than the superstitious equivalent of his weight in money.

they said he died because they wouldn't accept him ~

                                               Potency on Arrival

They said he died because they wouldn’t accept him! “Cried out the paperboy selling the juicy scoop from one bogey to another.

As the train motioned well into the night, the young paperboy sitting on the unsold stack, called his partner to arrange for more, the little blue pills are sold out.

delete ~

IMPEACHEMENT

If this command is pressed, his reign is over, at home, in office.
I have no judgment on him, I pass through the binaries of my existence with infinite precision.
I am not built to pass human judgment. But, oh boy do feel the need to shout out, ‘Don’t do it! Just don’t press DELETE!’

brevity ~

                   THE INTERVIEW THAT NEVER SHOULD’VE BEEN

The question he asked was simple. A yes or no would suffice.

A bead of sweat rolled down his weathered forehead.
And he started again from the day he was.

The mortified listener murderously twisted his pen in his hand thinking, ‘BREVITY is the soul of the wit! Great, now I need to bury you?

caress ~

REMORSE

“I am your priest, your spiritual guide, the one who makes the transition easy. I am here to smooth your soul. Your body cursed at your being this whole time. Now your journey ends. I ask you again, my friend, what do you seek? Pray tell.”
Beat.
“My mother’s caress!” says the man who dies.

quintessence ~

                                              BEFORE THE TESTAMENT

The first couple sat shattered, miles away from the pearly gates of Eden. As the serpent lay slithering in the momentary ecstasy of his sin, the light beamed across infinity.
“Choose as you shall my children, for you are not the fallen. In your freedom lies the heavenly element of my being!”
And, it began!

possession ~

           THE TOAST

“50 years! That’s right an exclamation follows that number.” He smiled the old gray of his eyes peering deep.
“50 years and it’s been a ride. I have grown from obsession, need, crave, hunger, lust to care, give, thought and at times adjust.
So, my dear I must confess, even today by you I’m Possessed.”






Being a lover of poetry, I found a certain rhythm in this project, an incomplete beauty in the limit of the words, just like the calm one finds in the confines of a single life giving breath.

And, this is what this project made me understand, the honesty each moment contains, that is absolutely complete on its own. Just like our memories adorning our walls in all our picture frames.

Ah, the finiteness of infinity.

7 comments:

Unknown said...

OMG...such great piece again, Akki....I love the 55 words project do give ur twitter bud a big hug for introducing it to u.....What can I, u never cease to amaze me with ur brilliance.

I do understand ur fear and im happy to see that u took that step to pin down some beautiful words....which left me wanting more.

Thankuu for all u do, take care and keep rocking....Love u loads....muuaaahhh

athiyam said...

first of all thanks for upgrading ur blog by writing this superb 10 words (55 words)
No doubt how good u r , ur writing shows and ofc a side of romantic Akshay too..wonderfully written n described so well each words. looking fwd for the rest and pls so keep writing. all the best :)

athiyam said...

Was just reading again.... a very touching and a somehow got emotional reading it..
"love","Brevity" "caress" just blew me away.
congo to u for this 55words projects.

whoami said...

Just one word - Brilliant!

arnavini pareek said...

wow.... u have a grt writing sense and ur thought of imagination is just outstanding..

Unknown said...

There's one more poem that gives more constraints. At Creative Writing class I used to write poems in this format. That was challenging :)

W. Carlos Williams "The Red WheelBarrow"
o much depends
upon

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens

Try this format!

Unknown said...

Dear A.dog, A.dog really?? funny though. Akshay Dogra sounds cooler��

I'm not a blogger, neither am I aware of this 55 word concepts. However I'm a reader, and would read anything given to me. Thanks to a friend who send links of this. This is the first time I read such a new concept and wow!! It was from you.

I agree there is certain rhyme to this and a connection to some. I loved caress, brevity, shoulders of love. Stunning!! That's if you ask me to pick out....but the rest are awesome too. The weighing machine....I think I laughed hard at my own situation....why can't people just weigh hearts??? Maybe I should just throw mine out too. Shoulders of love tell me all about love and trust...probably blind at times, nevertheless keeps us going.Each one has a lil message....that's why I would call them stunning.

It's been one and a half years since you wrote this and probably won't see this comment. But couldn't resist. Please write more, not just 55 words, much more.

Best wishes for everything that you do.... Writing, acting....stay safe, stay happy, stay healthy!!

Regards and prayers
N